I DON’T LIKE YOU TALKING TO OTHER GIRLS

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I DON’T LIKE YOU TALKING TO OTHER GIRLS

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Lotus Laura

March 30, 2020

I have no more time for games

Only for what is real.

So this time I am not afraid

To say exactly how I feel.

Normally I’d hold myself back

Normally I’d pretend not to care.

But if I’m giving you my devotion

Then I think it’s only fair.

I don’t like seeing you talk to other girls.

It really tears me apart.

I don’t like seeing you talk to other girls.

Feels like a knife stabbed in my heart.

Yeah, I don’t care if it’s small talk

And it’s so much worse when you flirt.

Gushing out all your charisma

Do you understand how that hurts?

No, I’m never mad at you — impossible

I’m shattered to pieces, broken glass

No, I’m not a violent person, not one to thrash.

But seeing you with another, it makes me want to slash!

My will power is strong, so I try to let it go

Yet I can no longer afford, not letting my true feelings be known.

6 responses to “I DON’T LIKE YOU TALKING TO OTHER GIRLS”

Sidharth

March 30, 2020

The intensity of your emotions really captivated me as a reader. The purity of love blended with emotional agony was delightful to say the least. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful post! According to your convenience please do read some of my writings would love to know what you think about them. 😊🙏

PS: You may want to rectify the spelling of tears in the ‘tares me apart’ section.

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1. Lotus Laura
  
  March 30, 2020
  
  Thank you so much! That is wonderful of you to say. I really appreciate it. ❤
  
  And yes, I will totally check out your posts! And thanks for the grammar check. 🙂
  
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  1. Sidharth
    
    March 30, 2020
    
    Pleasure was entirely mine. I’m not the one who sugarcoats stuff so if I find any area of improvement I never shy away from pointing it out. Thank you for accepting my request! I personally feel that we bloggers can intellectually grow when we interact and share our honest opinions this way. After all, in my view there’s more to blogging than just the number of followers & likes we get. 😅
    
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  2. Lotus Laura
    
    March 30, 2020
    
    I completely agree 100%! 🙂
    
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America On Coffee

April 3, 2020

Slashing is intense…😨

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1. Lotus Laura
  
  April 4, 2020
  
  Indeed 😔 thanks for reading! 🧡
  
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